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visual artist and writer marisol diaz

i am a self-defined Nuyorican creative (that is a Puerto Rican who is from both the isles of Manhattan, NYC and the Caribbean). I share daily in the joy of education and live in a cute port town in New York, in a 'teensy-weensy' apartment with my two dogs and canary named Valentino. Check out my Etsy shop for purchasable pieces. Please do not reproduce imagery off of this site without explicit credit and no derivatives may be made of my original imagery- Thank You.

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Wednesday
Mar042009

Mr. Door

3ww prompt: Avenge, Genuine, Ramble


Did you know if I painted your portrait it would look like this?
Beautiful and closed, especially to me.

door by marisol diaz

In front of you I ramble, on and on and on.
Behind you I am genuine.
Inside you I would tread lightly to avenge my heart.

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Reader Comments (9)

This is just a fine piece of writing. So simple, yet so powerful.

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterThomG

Great photo and very evocative wriing

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered Commenterpia

This has a very gentle feel to it.
If and it is, addressed to Mr Door then I get this amazing image of you walking around inside the door, of course when you said inside you, you might have been refering to the house - even so, this still has a very gentle feel to it!

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered Commentersweet talking guy

like someone who is desperate to be heard, I think the door is like a invisible wall that hides one's own desires but when it is open, it can bring out that longings that springs from within, or something like that

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered Commenterlissa

Oh, I've been there...Couldn't have written it as well, however!

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterTumblewords

I could feel the sadness. Love that you added a pic!

March 4, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterAngel

This was so heartfelt...and I love the photo of the door. Beautiful!

March 5, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterFledgling Poet

wonderful. you make it seem so easy. :) bravo!

March 5, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterSan

Amarettogirl,

Very smooth verse.
Insightful, delightful,
succint without seeming too terse.

Tschuess,
Chris

March 6, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterSepiru Chris

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